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Bohdi >> Apha of the Shen Pack
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Shen
Jul 28, 2007 9:56:28 GMT -5
Post by Valin on Jul 28, 2007 9:56:28 GMT -5
Bohdi awoke, but did not open his eyes. He dreaded another lonely day. He lets the sun's light created reds and yellows that danced inside his eyelids. It was a new day. What was to come Bohdi knew not. But the possibility of today being a day just like the many others before it made him want to stay curled up in the tall grass and sleep forever.
But he was not the type to let a day go to waste through sleep, though he envied those that could do this. He finally opened his orbs, warm and brown, and examined his surroundings. He was standing next to the Stone, the massive Stone. The Stone was a large rock in the middle of the grasslands that had a small cave inside for shelter and was tall enough to stand on and look out over the entire grassland. It was to be the main meeting place of his future pack, if one ever did come. Bohdi stretched his legs and yawned widely before trotting through the grass to the slanted base of the Stone. He began climbing upwards, placing his feet in small notches and on small patches of weeds to keep his footing. He finally reached the flat top.
Up here the wind blew stonger and a bit colder but it was just the wakeup he had been seeking. He let the gusts blast his face and finger through his pelt. He faced the wind and had to squint as it dried his orbs quite quickly. He looked out over the land. The sun made the mountains in the distance glow and the grassland look like golden fire that went on for miles. The sight always made him smile.
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Shen
Sept 2, 2007 18:07:13 GMT -5
Post by Aiyanna on Sept 2, 2007 18:07:13 GMT -5
Upon request, all subsequent posts on the Shen thread have been deleted. Valin will be creating an application for any members wishing to join Bohdi's pack, which will include a writing sample. This may be implemented for the Tamaril pack as well. I apologize for any inconveniences this may have caused.
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Shen
Sept 6, 2007 18:25:22 GMT -5
Post by mya on Sept 6, 2007 18:25:22 GMT -5
OCC: Were can you find this application?
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Shen
Oct 25, 2007 8:48:02 GMT -5
Post by randal0723 on Oct 25, 2007 8:48:02 GMT -5
Yes, where can we find this application? I would like to join this pack...
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Shen
Oct 25, 2007 11:03:37 GMT -5
Post by Aiyanna on Oct 25, 2007 11:03:37 GMT -5
The application is in one of the other threads in the Grasslands, but Valin (whose wolf is the leader of this pack) has been really busy lately. If you want to RP right away, it might be best to join another pack. Tamaril (my wolf's pack at the Summit) is advanced like Shen, and the other active packs are Fenari and Puarrel.
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Shen
Oct 26, 2007 16:46:42 GMT -5
Post by randal0723 on Oct 26, 2007 16:46:42 GMT -5
Nani walked slowly through the tall, thick grass. She let the grass tickle hersides as she went along. she scanned the area for other wolves. She knew there had to be others out here somewhere, she couldn't be the only one here. Nani walked until a large rok came into view. And on top of it was a little figure, [glow=red,2,300]"A wolf!"[/glow] she said to her self excitedly. She walked faster almost running until she reached the bottom of the rock. Once she was there she spoke loudly so that the other wolf would see her there, [glow=red,2,300]"Hello! I'm Nani!"[/glow] she waited to see if he had heard her. She sat down and rested her legs while she waited.
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Shen
Oct 26, 2007 16:53:12 GMT -5
Post by randal0723 on Oct 26, 2007 16:53:12 GMT -5
OOC - I just wanted to point a few things out, I don't say things like orbs for eyes, or cranium/skull for head. I just find those things weird. And sorry I didn't post a very long post but right now I don't know much about the land or the other wolves, so I wasn't sure what to say-
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Valin
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Bohdi >> Apha of the Shen Pack
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Shen
Oct 28, 2007 10:08:58 GMT -5
Post by Valin on Oct 28, 2007 10:08:58 GMT -5
OOC- Thats okay for now, but remember that this is an advanced RP and so I expect the best writing from you. Those words can make your post sound better. <3
Bohdi heard a voice calling from below. His head immediately shot down, and automatically, he puffed his chest out and stood tall, ears forward in a position of higher authority. Although he appeared confident and ready really his insides were swirling. He hadn't come into contact with another wolf for much too long and he didnt know if he was socially inept because of such. He couldn't remember the last time he had actually spoken out loud for there had been no reason to. Now there was.
Hello Nani. My name is Bohdi. I have claimed this land that is the grasslands and I am the highest authority. he barked down at the new wolf, projecting his voice as much as possible so that he might seem mighty. Why have you come to the Grasslands?
The wolf below was dainty and light grey with a glowing white face, like his own. She seemed young to him because of the intensity of her excitement.
OOC- Wretchedly short post on my part. x___x Sorry about that.
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Shen
Oct 28, 2007 13:20:44 GMT -5
Post by aiyanna on Oct 28, 2007 13:20:44 GMT -5
Susan shot up to a standing position. Had that been.... surely not... but had it? Was that another wolf... !? There had not been another wolf in the Grasslands... for.... Susan could not recall. Somehow she knew it had been long. 'Maybe this is my chance' , she thought. Suddenly, her stomach made a loud tumbling noise. She had to get food, this was no lie. Sleep had been priority in the last weeks waiting for a sight of another wolf. Now, food was top on the list. Carefully, she tried taking a step. KUPLUMP!! No success. Ms. Smith, now lying on her side, made another attempt. She had to.
Several minutes later, she had success. She could walk! Cautiously she trotted closer to the faint figure. Squinting, not one, but two wolves came into view. Trotting closer she began to speak, "Hello... which of you is in authority?". Head down, and tail down. That was the key. Susan knew that she had to provide submission. Her parents had been alpha.... until the attack. Sir Fer, the head alpha, had slashed his daughters nose, leaving a life-long scar. Thinking that Susan was an intruder packs pup, he banished her, chasing her off into the forest. Susan had wandered, hunted, and lived on her own.... until now, that is.... if she can get into a pack again. She was born with the natural instinct to alpha, it was her ingrained instinct to lead, and to one day build her own pack. First though... she had to get food, and to get her strength back, she figured, she had to join a pack.
Now... could it be? Susan Smith waiting patiently, now sitting, let her head hang low. In this way, she showed her future pack leader, her faith.
[OOC: Ok, definitly weird wording on this, I know. But, I'm quite shocked at the moment, and I'm not thinking straight. Sorry bout' that.]
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Valin
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Bohdi >> Apha of the Shen Pack
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Shen
Nov 12, 2007 19:12:44 GMT -5
Post by Valin on Nov 12, 2007 19:12:44 GMT -5
Posting soon.
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Shen
Nov 23, 2007 12:43:35 GMT -5
Post by aiyanna on Nov 23, 2007 12:43:35 GMT -5
When is soon? -giggles-
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